男人的天堂AⅤ一区二区

Chapter 51.2





TL: Milaryn


Edit: IlkonEbi


Regarding the first time of the two lolis, when I discussed this idea with others, they said that it seemed too hasty . After I wrote it, people did, in fact, say it seemed rushed . Yeah, it may seem rushed, and as to why everyone said this, I could probably guess why . This is because, in many books, this defloration situation could be considered one of the highlights as a big climax . The process leading up to the moment is brilliant and then after that climax, it’s common to change to the next female character . This is an ordinary, regular type of plot point, but I did not wish for this book to follow this type of cliche . Even though this could also be considered as a self-insert novel, Banana has never been one of those safe authors and Banana hopes to put his own twist in it .


As to what kind of twist — I wanted to show another type of natural, comfortable feeling . These two girls, Lingjing and Shasha, had already made their decision to live together after losing their first time . Try imaging it: one boy and two girls, the three of them being high school students . During the time period when they go to school, they are living together, almost like a married couple . At school, they have to interact a certain way, but when they return home to the rented apartment, it is another way of life . Their life would definitely not be monotonous and the two girls would hope to mature quicker to handle society and handle the students at school . As to the teachers, there was a small incident and that is during the later time period of high school .


In addition, the power of the criminal underworld would move during this high school period as well . It would affect their school and home life and create a comfortable and stimulating atmosphere, which is what Banana is aiming for . Afterward, as the children finally mature, they would be able to finally experience true feelings of love . Of course, when the two girls finally do mature, it is the time I am waiting for, while at the same time, this part of the story reaches one of its climaxes .


I have said to people before that this novel does not have a complete outline yet, because the outline of the ‘Diary’ is too perverted and instead restricts my writing . The outline of this novel is not yet completely defined, the only thing that I can be sure of is that I want to write out certain kind of feelings . The high school period of this novel is the first important focus, so I will work hard on it!



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